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Love Lost !!

This is what I dreamt of last night. I would really appreciate comments on this one. This is the very first piece of writing and I need a little motivation to keep going. Thank you.
Why did you come back into my life?
When I was on the verge of forgetting you,
Now I stand still at the edge of a sea cliff,

Hands stretched wide apart,
Asking God to give me my soul back,
Or else it won’t be too long for me,

To just dive into the depth of this earth.
Why why why did you come back into my life,
This is what I keep asking myself,
When I was on the verge of forgetting you.
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Published: 12/3/2010
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