As Time Passes By

I find no point, but still I try and try.
As the time passes by,
I try to see,
What you used to be,
I try and try.

As time passes by,
Love is a lie,
And so I cry,
You don't love me,
You found someone else,
Sorry I could not be.

The person you want me to be,
What I have found,
My love for you was strong,
As I find no point, I try and try,
As the time passes by.
This is my first poem, do you find it good?
You suck.
It was good.
Published: 12/5/2013
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