Love Has Had Many Victims - Chapter 1

The interesting love affair between a man and an women, or so it is believed... This is just chapter one. I would enjoy some honestest but please keep in mind, this is the first story that I ever started on. Please comment.
As I lay there feeling his warm breath linger on my neck, I wanted to grab his waist and pull him deeper in me. I stretched my arms out and grabbed the thick blanket and pulled on it. He ran his arms down along mine and as my hands open, his fingers interlocked with mine. I could feel him coming closer to an end when I blacked out. When I woke up, I saw him at the end of the bed with a plate of scrambled eggs.

I looked up at him and smiled when he said, "That good?"
I grabbed the blanket and held it against my chest as I sat up. I grabbed the eggs with attitude and sat next to me. I finally got out of bed to go to the shower. When I got to the door, I saw a figure to my left. I turned quickly to see who it was. I yelled for Auden. He ran into the master bedroom and grabbed me.

He looked at me startled and asked, "What's wrong? You're hurt?"

I shook my head and pointed toward where I saw the figure run through. Auden walked out toward the direction and disappeared. I walked into the bathroom and started running water for my shower. I hung my bathrobe on the hanger as I got into the shower. The hot water felt good on my sore muscles. As I lathered my hair with my favorite strawberry and cream shampoo, all I could think about was the figure, could it just be my imagination. The figure stood about 6 feet tall and somewhat inches. It was extremely broad, so I was guessing it was a male or a female bodybuilder. How did they get in the house, Auden finally took out the trash and left the door unlocked. I turned off the water and stepped out of the shower. It felt like I had jumped from summer to winter. I quickly grabbed my robe and wrapped it around me. I stepped in front of the mirror and behind me I could see the same figure. This time I didn't scream, and closed my eyes, hoping they would just disappear. I could hear Auden knocking on the bathroom door, that I had locked right after I had come in.

I shouted to Auden, "They're in here!"
"Get away from the door," he shouted back.

I tried to navigate away from the door, the best I could with my eyes closed. I heard the door shatter and Auden landed by my side. He picked me up and laid me on the bed. I could feel him holding me, his heart was beating fast, faster than mine! He kissed me on the neck up to my forehead. I loved getting his attention but not in this situation. I just wanted to hide away from this figure. I was beginning to think I was going insane.

"I love you," Auden whispered in my ear.

I looked up and kissed him tenderly on the lips, he returned the kiss. I smiled gently at the situation where neither one of us wanted to depart lips. I pushed him onto his back and I crawled up onto his extremely muscled stomach and just lied there. I pushed my fingers through his soft, curly brown hair. He looked at me. I just wanted to jump into his emerald-green eyes. He was just so perfect. He had no flaws that I had known about.

"I love you too," I finally told him.
"I want to marry you," he spoke softly, wrapping his arms around me.
I jumped up really fast and looked at him with a huge grin on my face.
"Seriously?" I questioned.

He leaned over and opened up his bedside drawer and pulled out a small black box. He rolled me off the top of him. He stood up and just as fast he was on one knee. I was jumping up and down on my knees. I had never really thought about this moment before. Auden smiled and grabbed my hands.

"Clio Alexandria Myron, will you be my wife?"
"Auden Emeric Sinclair, I will be your Clio Alexandria Sinclair!"
I pulled my hand up to examine the ring. It was gorgeous and the one I had wanted. It was a Pave and Prong Trellis ring. The diamond was a beautiful sapphire. It looked so amazing on my left hand. Auden grabbed my left hand and kissed the ring with such passion, never taking his eyes off mine.

"What should we do today, Mrs. Sinclair?"
"First I think we should take a trip to my parents, Mr. Sinclair."
"Sounds like a plan."

Auden shot up from the red carpet and into the bathroom to get a shower. As I stood up, Auden's head pops out of the bathroom.
"Would you like to take another shower, Mrs. Sinclair?"
I stood up and dropped my robe.
"I would, Mr. Sinclair."
Should I post chapter 2?
Yes, absolutely.
Hell no!
Published: 7/30/2013
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