Nature 4: Trouble in the Sea

I wrote this to cover the under water part of nature that is often overlooked. It is not very long, but still good (I hope :)
The ocean
Calm as can be

Fish swim in circles all day
But they still won't go away

Flee, flee, flee
The boats are coming can't you see?
But you can't
You're the sea
Was the poem good?
Yes! loved it :)
Not really, no
Good, but the other Natures are much better, this shouldn't have been part of the series.
Published: 4/5/2011
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