Painting My Heart - Chapter Eleven (Part 2) The End

This is the ending guys! So sorry!
Nevie pulled back after a minute and stepped back. "I should probably go."
Colby nodded. "Okay. Do you want to hang out tomorrow? We could... talk some more..." He sounded unsure of himself and Nevie couldn’t help but smile at how adorable he sounded.
"Yeah, I’d like that." She leaned forward and pressed her lips against his cheek. "I’ll see you tomorrow then. Good night."

As she slowly walked back to her house where Katherine would be waiting, Nevie had the sudden sense that everything was complete. Jonah was still gone, but it no longer seemed to haunt her. Katherine was back, hopefully to stay, and for once in her life Nevie was beginning to feel loved. She smiled and scooped Moon Shadow up. He was lagging behind a bit, just begging to be held for the remainder of the walk. Nevie smiled and pressed her lips to the top of his shaggy head. "I love you Moon Shadow."

The End


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Dear Readers,

I realize that this is an abrupt ending to the story and I apologize for not warning you all that the story would be coming to a close. I didn’t realize myself until I reread the last few chapters. Nevie’s realized that everything is going to be okay, she’s happy and that’s where her story ends. She has everything she needs now.

I may eventually rewrite this story to make it better. I’m so sorry that it took me so long to write this last chapter, especially since it’s so short. I can’t really explain it all, I’ve just been going through some really hard things right now and writing has been nearly impossible.

I’ll try my hardest to have something new for you guys shortly, but the way things have been lately, are making me wonder whether writing is something I will really be able to pursue. I want to thank you all for reading and commenting. You guys are the most amazing people ever. You have no idea how happy reading your comments make me. They make even the worst day become the best for me. I love you all so much!!
Published: 8/8/2013
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