Please Come Back To Me - Version 2

It's just a version of my poem - 'Please Come Back To Me'.
Is there a way I can show you what you mean to me?
Into your heart deep, is the place where I want to be.

Don't be silent, come back to me and make me cry,
Tell me the reason, why did you leave me, say why?

There is no way I can escape having your dreams,
It's you for whom my heart aches and it screams.

You left my heart alone and took my heartbeat along,
With you is where my peace and paradise belong.

An urge to you straight from my heart, it's a plea,
I deserve to be with you, please come back to me.
Which one is better?
Version 1.
Version 2.
Published: 11/26/2012
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