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The Sun - Haiku

I first wrote this poem in 5th Grade. Mrs. Magnuson got me into doing poetry. Without her, I honestly don't know if I would have ever gotten into poetry. I'm so glad, I did though. I am now 16, in the 11th grade and achieving my dreams. This poem is a Haiku.
The sun is as hot,
As a meteorite,
That never stops being hot.
How good is this poem considering it's the first poem I EVER wrote?
Ok.
Good.
Great.
Amazing.
Brilliant.
Needs work.
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Published: 11/13/2013
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