Deserted BeautyComments on article "Deserted Beauty"
|sumit||it is good||10/2/2009|
|Bridget||Well...poems are supposed to be beautiful, right? I don't think this one really fits that picture, if you know what I'm saying. The rhyme was bad, and to me, the poem had to much going on in it. Sorry||4/16/2009|
|miranda S.||i liked it .
you should get more into it though.
then you could maybe get one published!
|riya t||it's a lovely and nice poem||8/23/2008|