||nice poem . i like it
||Hiya BennyBoy, Certainly a lot of potential. This is an uplifting poem that leads to feeling good. Write more of this type and you will go places. Keep away from the sorrowful lonely poems I see so much of. they are just depressing rubbish written by sados. I'm sad enough myself - I dont want to read others sorrows. I want to read happy forward-looking poetry like this. Good luck and may the good Lord enlighten you to include a little hit of his existence in your work.
Straight from the Heart...