Dark Life

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Javier focus too much on the rhyme scheme dont see the emotion or hatred behind what you are trying to show
speak more from the heart man
Poorni i'm 13 year old girl from sri lanka. everything what's happening seems so unlucky and bad to me. i don't think i'm suffering from depression, but at the time i saw this poem, i think i'm a depressed teenager. i don't know what to do next. i hate my life my everything. no one can help me 10/31/2011
flora elia its greatful and helpful for people knowns how wonderful life is turning in the life and it tells people how people live life..i think it excellent. 10/12/2011
Karyme Your really good i like making up poems,and also reading them this is my favorite poem its really good 10/5/2011
the random girl it rocks i love it 6/13/2011
Mikki This poem is the best poem I have ever read and I am in middle school 4/18/2011
Isa Falche This poem is excellent! 4/6/2011
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