||acting as if it was a drem was very clever on your part, i like the idea you went with in being it real life and yet acting as if it was a dream. it was a great poem keep up with the good poetry
||I don't come up with this, It just comes to me. Signed, the author
||I loved it! its sooo good how do you come up with stuff like that?
|whisper in the
||this a really good poem i like how you make it seem like a dream but in the end it is the real thing keep up the good work dude
||i love it
||your mind is so clever
||nyc one...infact me too olso write poemzzzzzzz
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