Who Would You Rather Be?Comments on article "Who Would You Rather Be?"
|yana||You only live once; but if you live it right, once is enough.
this was great
|Omkar||.Thank you though for your constructive criticism, it's welcome.. I agree with you.. I only rhyme by accident! Why does a poem 'have to' rhyme? I prefer free form.. I write what I want, not what the readers are looking for.. touch of arrogance there, but can't help it.. Rhyming is fun yes, but I don't like sacrificing thought just so that the words rhyme! May be I will try it, if I enjoy it..someday.. :)||2/10/2012|
|Janelle||i feel like the only time you rhyme it's on accident. try writing a rhyming poem instead of a free-form poem to attract more readers. ok poem though i guess||2/9/2012|
|Batul||Definitely makes you think, and the only answer I get after reading this poem is I did rather just be ME :) Do continue writing your poems..||2/8/2012|
|Omkar||Thank you S, Neha.. :)||2/8/2012|
|Neha J||Outstanding composition of words! Not only thought-provoking, but motivating as well. :)||2/7/2012|
|Omkar||Thank you MI, Anuja.. :)||2/7/2012|
|MI||the poem definitely makes you think! Thought-provoking||2/7/2012|
|Anuja Kanhere||Very Inspiring...!||2/7/2012|
|Omkar||Thank you Veethi.. :)||2/7/2012|
|Veethi||Definitely makes you stop whatever you are doing, and think. Thumbs up from my side.||2/7/2012|