Who Would You Rather Be?

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yana You only live once; but if you live it right, once is enough.
this was great
Omkar .Thank you though for your constructive criticism, it's welcome.. I agree with you.. I only rhyme by accident! Why does a poem 'have to' rhyme? I prefer free form.. I write what I want, not what the readers are looking for.. touch of arrogance there, but can't help it.. Rhyming is fun yes, but I don't like sacrificing thought just so that the words rhyme! May be I will try it, if I enjoy it..someday.. :) 2/10/2012
Janelle i feel like the only time you rhyme it's on accident. try writing a rhyming poem instead of a free-form poem to attract more readers. ok poem though i guess 2/9/2012
Batul Definitely makes you think, and the only answer I get after reading this poem is I did rather just be ME :) Do continue writing your poems.. 2/8/2012
Omkar Thank you S, Neha.. :) 2/8/2012
Neha J Outstanding composition of words! Not only thought-provoking, but motivating as well. :) 2/7/2012
deenaa helloo mee 2/7/2012
mee hiiii 2/7/2012
S Awesome! 2/7/2012
Omkar Thank you MI, Anuja.. :) 2/7/2012
MI the poem definitely makes you think! Thought-provoking 2/7/2012
Anuja Kanhere Very Inspiring...! 2/7/2012
Omkar Thank you Veethi.. :) 2/7/2012
Veethi Definitely makes you stop whatever you are doing, and think. Thumbs up from my side. 2/7/2012
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